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Do you remember this pic I did some months ago? ^^ :origin()/pre09/5522/th/pre/i/2015/295/2/2/a_little_help_please_by_codricor1-d9dx6xe.png)
well ^^ the thing that Cayla Asked Jack to test one "invent" of Lizzette ^^ of course Cayla had asked Liz before to help her make something that could match the strengh of Jack. so after many tries that started in that last pic. during some months. Liz finally could create a perfect couples of finger traps that could keep Jack fingers together, of course the most she pull them stronger the finger traps hold her fingers.
But she doesn't know that, as she had no troubles before with just tearing the finger traps apart. But now what it looked at first as another test for the new "models" turned into a plan for her girlfriend Angel and Cayla her best friend to keep the big girl from moving and letting her body exposed, so they could "cheer" her up and have share some giggles with their strongh friend.
Jack was raised yet with her fingers trapped by some chains after all the original ideas was to test ONLY HER FINGERS to break the traps. So the pose she is was planned for her to only be able to use her fingers and not another part of her body so there is no toehold for her legs or arms. that's why she is not able to touch the floor, and why her arms are hanging from the ceiling, Gravity makes it's work keeping her going down and the lovely girls at her sides make their work keeping her from concentrating enough to be able to use more strengh.
HAPPY ENDING FOR EVERYONE!! XD of course the Bikini is cause Jack usually wear her Bra only (specially in the new design) and cause she get's too hot when wearing normal clothes, so now imagine been in a place with many machines, and steam, yeeeep hotter for her. (also I like bikinis so why not o3o )
Good is her friend and girlfriend right?....right? XD cause I am sure she will be laughing for a looong time there, but atleast they are pretty close people of her doing it XD
oh Yes Jack is a sexy lovely and badass mermaid girl as shown here:origin()/pre02/9b61/th/pre/i/2016/004/b/6/jaqueline__2016__by_codricor1-d9mrcjg.png)
BUT that doesn't stop her friends from tickling her a lot and make her blush with teases and tickles XD
ENJOY!!!
Now this pic is the seccond part of a birthday pic for
I wanted to finish a long time ago. But now with Jack's new design XD it looks cooler even!
Also I could say someone else (cough,
cough) helped me with the idea XD
Cayla belongs to
Jack belongs to and me o3o I think
Angel belongs to me
well ^^ the thing that Cayla Asked Jack to test one "invent" of Lizzette ^^ of course Cayla had asked Liz before to help her make something that could match the strengh of Jack. so after many tries that started in that last pic. during some months. Liz finally could create a perfect couples of finger traps that could keep Jack fingers together, of course the most she pull them stronger the finger traps hold her fingers.But she doesn't know that, as she had no troubles before with just tearing the finger traps apart. But now what it looked at first as another test for the new "models" turned into a plan for her girlfriend Angel and Cayla her best friend to keep the big girl from moving and letting her body exposed, so they could "cheer" her up and have share some giggles with their strongh friend.
Jack was raised yet with her fingers trapped by some chains after all the original ideas was to test ONLY HER FINGERS to break the traps. So the pose she is was planned for her to only be able to use her fingers and not another part of her body so there is no toehold for her legs or arms. that's why she is not able to touch the floor, and why her arms are hanging from the ceiling, Gravity makes it's work keeping her going down and the lovely girls at her sides make their work keeping her from concentrating enough to be able to use more strengh.
HAPPY ENDING FOR EVERYONE!! XD of course the Bikini is cause Jack usually wear her Bra only (specially in the new design) and cause she get's too hot when wearing normal clothes, so now imagine been in a place with many machines, and steam, yeeeep hotter for her. (also I like bikinis so why not o3o )
Good is her friend and girlfriend right?....right? XD cause I am sure she will be laughing for a looong time there, but atleast they are pretty close people of her doing it XD
oh Yes Jack is a sexy lovely and badass mermaid girl as shown here
BUT that doesn't stop her friends from tickling her a lot and make her blush with teases and tickles XDENJOY!!!
Now this pic is the seccond part of a birthday pic for
I wanted to finish a long time ago. But now with Jack's new design XD it looks cooler even!Also I could say someone else (cough,
cough) helped me with the idea XDCayla belongs to
Jack belongs to
and me o3o I thinkAngel belongs to me
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Originality Technique ImpactOkay, I'm not gonna lie I got some bias on this and there are some things I wanna say about Jack but I'll save that for the critique on her. For this I'm gonna try really hard to be neutral and I'm gonna bite my tongue on a few things. But like I said in my comment on this piece, I do not dislike this picture at all. I really do like it and you worked hard on it. Here's what I gotta say here.
The vision is at 4.5 only because I think you could have made the image a little bit brighter. It would make the black parts of Jack's hair easier to see and would make everyone in it stand out more. In its entirety though this a very visual image with good color choices. They fit the characters' personalities and help them stand out from the background.
Originality is at a 4 only because I've seen this method of tickling before. Its not bad, it just doesn't feel as entirely creative as the last pic you did with Cayla and Angel. I feel like there is so much more that you could have come up with given the powers of the two ticklers. All I can say is that don't be afraid to get creative in your tickle methods. Embrace everything with the characters and put it to use.
Your technique is spot on here. There's nothing more you could have done with this image that's already done and done in all the right ways.
Impact, again I really don't know how I'm supposed to judge it, its at five stars because it shows the bonding between Angel and Jack and their openness with Cayla. And for that it makes an impact because it informs us more about the three. Overall well done and another excellent piece to your gallery.